tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post4219236247212136689..comments2009-04-29T22:32:50.766+01:00Beatrice Vhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-90840632778652824042009-04-29T20:43:00.000+01:002009-04-29T20:43:00.000+01:00

such a sad ending. i loved the imagery in this one.

Tesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04518741453497496022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-26864210865091436212009-04-25T15:23:00.000+01:002009-04-25T15:23:00.000+01:00

Once in a while you read a poem where and ordinary comment would just seem trite. This is it! From imagery to thought it is superb. Much admiration. Cecelia

Cecelia's Placehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15960620697156523192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-79361725373082067462009-03-31T15:52:00.000+01:002009-03-31T15:52:00.000+01:00

Oh B, this is beautiful. I wish I had a lover like this even if it were for a short while. Love it.<BR/><BR/><BR/>love-bd

Beloved Dreamerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-53897009709802213882009-03-12T17:02:00.000Z2009-03-12T17:02:00.000Z

Your magical lines made me unbearably lonely...

Chandini Santoshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13150207369779168000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-58122659299918663062009-03-08T23:05:00.000Z2009-03-08T23:05:00.000Z

I was drawn right into this one- and then the last line- oh! I love it!

J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-91785717911915526822009-03-08T10:01:00.000Z2009-03-08T10:01:00.000Z

I love sonnets and this one is just inspirational. It is like a warm summer kiss between the brances and an intense rush that sweeps you off your feet and then leaves you a bit overwhelmed. Brilliant. Brilliant.

daydreamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09140305922494369576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-79201478128823480802009-03-05T20:15:00.000Z2009-03-05T20:15:00.000Z

<I>orange-blossom inebriated ...</I><BR/><BR/>beautiful ....<BR/><BR/>heartbreaking ....<BR/><BR/>xxxooo<BR/>rdm

red dirt mulehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12939283533222061484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-30380170033087128822009-03-03T19:14:00.000Z2009-03-03T19:14:00.000Z

Very lovely, the feel of your words and thoughts blowing gently across my being.<BR/>I have no idea how to post on the haiku page, but I did put something on the eroticism one and on both of mine. Can you believe I have actually been here for a couple hours. Read White Rose's beautiful writing and also Gypsy Wanderer. Very, very inspiring and beautifully crafted.<BR/>I can't use outlook express

mysticgmekeeprhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12005968619382836095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-70954955074460396292009-03-02T11:12:00.000Z2009-03-02T11:12:00.000Z

hi beatrice <BR/>i came here after a long time.<BR/>i loved your touch the moon.and this one sand and dust is so eloquent but the end gave it a different turn. beautiful as ever.

jyotsanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11348544707786355970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-72040418917091224262009-03-02T09:19:00.000Z2009-03-02T09:19:00.000Z

Beatrice, <BR/><BR/>I understand you have a busy time organising things at your end and also busy with your readings.<BR/><BR/>Excuse me and leave aside what i said of you suggesting haikus for publishing there.<BR/><BR/>I am not that very serious about poetry. Just jotting what strikes me...many a times it was communicating what I had to say to a very interfereing world. <BR/><BR/>Hope you

Devikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-49733899010938574902009-03-02T03:32:00.000Z2009-03-02T03:32:00.000Z

Hi Beatrice, <BR/><BR/>So nice of you to say that here, my dear <BR/>I too miss friends, but the talkative me makes it up at others' :)<BR/><BR/>Alan Summers is a familiar name to me --read many at Seasonal Haiku blogs<BR/><BR/>And me submitting to haiku blogs -- you may tell me of those ones you liked Beatrice...and then I will add...I can't makeout myself, really.<BR/><BR/>thank you so much,

Devikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-82562056995298242742009-03-01T18:50:00.000Z2009-03-01T18:50:00.000Z

*Thanks Petra, I was cosntrained by having to make this into a sonnet (not quite achieved -neither in meter nor rhyme, but close) <BR/><BR/>*Devika, thank you, I am enjoying your Abstract Deductions, there is a lovely feeling of calm on a page without comments -tempting, but when I tried it, I missed my friends here. Hope when you feel ready you will regale us with a haiku or tanka on the Spring

Beatrice Vhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-20698305956416569912009-03-01T14:53:00.000Z2009-03-01T14:53:00.000Z

"The wily fortune teller" can never take away the pain, but merely provide false hope. Loved it, B.!

petra michelle; Whose role is it anyway?http://www.blogger.com/profile/03474448747236205303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-942127524127298405.post-25989384581144296202009-03-01T14:40:00.000Z2009-03-01T14:40:00.000Z

Oh! i loved this one, Beatrice :)<BR/><BR/>very expressive with wonderful imageries..<BR/><BR/>wishes, <BR/>devika

Devikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com